umm.really love some of this...and really don't like some.you need more air.chapter opener looks good.first spread looks good.second spread is too heavy.third spread is promising, but doesn't deliver.like what you're starting to do with the pull quote, but haven't gone far enough.not sure about the rest.it's not terrible, just not as strong as the beginning.bring to class and we'll discuss further.good?love.g.
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umm.
really love some of this...
and really don't like some.
you need more air.
chapter opener looks good.
first spread looks good.
second spread is too heavy.
third spread is promising, but doesn't deliver.
like what you're starting to do with the pull quote, but haven't gone far enough.
not sure about the rest.
it's not terrible, just not as strong as the beginning.
bring to class and we'll discuss further.
good?
love.
g.
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